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In the brightest darkness
In my deepest sorrow

I finally see what is wrong with me
I can't get over her
You can see how I feel

All these memories
That keep haunting me

Of a paper heart cut into pieces
By the scissors it fell for
He cannot forget her

When these days come and go
I'll remember what seems to be not to long ago

And as weeks fly by
These scars won't escape my eye

I'll tape myself back together
I'll fall apart when I walk past her

And I still hold these piece in my arms
The torn up shreds of my paper heart
The pieces that keep falling apart

I still wonder what happened to us
Was it something I've done? Was it something she said?

I can't keep putting the pieces together
I'm falling apart each time I think about her

And my paper heart is crumpled up
This paper heart is cut up and torn up
And no tape, no glue, will make it whole again

And still I hold these pieces in my arms
Waiting to see what you can do to fix me
Waiting to see if things will go back to how they used to be
This is a poem I improvised, I really like it, actually. It's got the concept I wanted to portray and I think I did a pretty good job with it. Anyways, I hope you enjoy and let me know what you think! This is one of those poems I tried to rhyme.
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musicaddict96 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
i really llike this poem.
i can actually see whats going on through this poem in my head.
^W^ :clap: very great job! i really feel like drawing something because of it, and maybe i will/
but who knows, i procrastinate.
but maybe!
its still really good! :D keep up the great work! :meow:
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LovelessEnd Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
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musicaddict96 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
no problem! :D It was awesome! :D
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LovelessEnd Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks again! :D
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musicaddict96 Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2010
no problem! :D again! :XD:
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WoofCurse Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010
Very well written.
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LovelessEnd Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you =)
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JSteinman Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You've done it again! Wonderfully written :D
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LovelessEnd Featured By Owner May 30, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! =) And I appreciate the fave! =)
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JSteinman Featured By Owner May 31, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
'twas me pleasure :bow:
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